My holidays by Ema, 6°2

                     My holidays

During my holidays, I flew to a paradise.

 
I watched dolphins and fish with beautiful colours.

I swam with dolphins and I heard them cry.

It was great and fantastic...

This paradise is L'ile Maurice.

Ema, 6°2

Vocabulary :

fly/flew/flown = voler / voyager en avion

watch = regarder

swim/swam/swum = nager

hear/heard/heard = entendre

Comments

[Mazabrard Léa]

On dit pas You are very lucky puisque lucky veut dire chanceux luck ca veut dire chance c'est ma maman qui l'a dit.

[Marielle Bianchi]

Et si Léa, on dit "you are very lucky" ! Dis-le à ta maman ! C'est pour cela qu'il est préférable de ne pas traduire mot à mot...

[Marie]

You are very lucky !! La prochaine fois, je viens avec toi !!!!!Marie

[benmouffok amel]

I agree with you !!! It's paradise!!!!! You very very lucky!!!!!!!

[Virginie et Billel]

It's very beautiful !You are very lucky ! 

[Mazabrard Léa]

Tu as du beaucoup t'amuser la bas et en plus il a du faire trés beau tu as de la chance (you are luck)

[Marielle Bianchi]

Léa, you should say : You are lucky